As the author gripped his pen,
took up his stance,
people changed their stance,
leaped as he leaped,
soared
And plunged.
– (c) Boringbug
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As the author gripped his pen,
took up his stance,
people changed their stance,
leaped as he leaped,
soared
And plunged.
– (c) Boringbug
Your best poem because of its simple yet lively diction. My favorite parts: the repetition of “stance” and the last line, although I do think you could do without the ellipses and exclamation mark.
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Thank you for your input. I’ve incorporated these changes. :)
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