A fine book!

As the author gripped his pen,
took up his stance,
people changed their stance,
leaped as he leaped,


And plunged.

– (c) Boringbug

2 Comments Add yours

  1. Yang Ho says:

    Your best poem because of its simple yet lively diction. My favorite parts: the repetition of “stance” and the last line, although I do think you could do without the ellipses and exclamation mark.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. boringbug says:

      Thank you for your input. I’ve incorporated these changes. :)

      Liked by 1 person

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