The Boringbug

A fine book!

As the author gripped his pen, took up his stance, people changed their stance, leaped as he leaped, soared And plunged. – (c) Boringbug

The Boring Bug
1–2 minutes
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As the author gripped his pen,
took up his stance,
people changed their stance,
leaped as he leaped,

soared

And plunged.

– (c) Boringbug

2 responses to “A fine book!”

  1. Yang Ho

    Your best poem because of its simple yet lively diction. My favorite parts: the repetition of “stance” and the last line, although I do think you could do without the ellipses and exclamation mark.

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    1. boringbug

      Thank you for your input. I’ve incorporated these changes. :)

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